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I choose you, the lack of,
give up on your love,
off the tower, a momentous occasion,

dive, and test thy wings,

I feel the cooler air free,
but the ground getting larger and larger,

waiting for my wax to dry,
my drugs to kick,

your spine to crack,
waiting, for my heart to sink,

*clink*

and there it goes, to the bottom of your fishbowl,
I'm your pet, you can just,
pick me up and set me back,
you could show me off but all you do is let me down.

are my expectations too great, or do you have "standards"?

twist the knife, these drugs don't work like they used to,
I could cry and drown in the ice,

my fridge has been on the fritz,
with my dizzy spells, forgetful nature,
lost, wake, deja vu, lost, I wake up in a strange place,

and you're never here, but I see your signs.
.pain.
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tamiea Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it :)
It expresses a lot of emotions.

Technical comment I think there is an "are" to much near the "standards"

Good job !!!
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TheCharacter-K Feb 25, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks,

and t'was a mis-type. Often I get very worked up in writing and tend to skim over things.
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